Pitching Whitewashed Jacarandas
Pitching Whitewashed Jacarandas
An African Outpost, a Royal Visit and the Pursuit of Progress.
Goucher, a small liberal arts college in Maryland, is scrapping the standard college application in favor of a two-minute video made on a smart phone. Though the idea sounds revolutionary, literary agents at writer’s conferences have long used the two-minute pitch as the crux of decision making in finding new authors with a fresh story to tell:
Whitewashed Jacarandas a 99,000 word novel is based on true events.
Forbidden marriage during WWII means Doctor Sunny Rubenstein and his Gentile wife, Mavourneen, know they only have each other. Demobbed, brilliant and self-confident he nevertheless discovers posts are hard to find. But finally, armed with his Zeiss microscope, a set of surgical and dental instruments and medical books crammed into the boot of his camouflage green army Ford (issued in lieu of a resettlement allowance) they leave South Africa with Apartheid on the horizon in the rear view mirror. Ahead is his 51st prospect in the heart of Southern Rhodesia and a rich gold mine attached to the smallest municipality in the world, Umzimtuti.
The big draw for him is the free rein he’ll have in the New Government Hospital theatre and for Mavourneen and small son, Douglas, is liberation from their dingy Pretoria flat to the joy of a free sprawling garden and house with an indoor toilet−the only one in town.
Sunny’s days start at sunrise with Sick Parade of the African mine workers under a jacaranda tree. Morning surgery and consultations give way to distant clinics, then calls to remote farms and mud huts, getting home after everyone’s lights are out.
He realizes most of the diseases he treats are preventable, but the buxom hospital matron is obstructive. The mine management puts London shareholder profits before people. Entrenched Mayor Buchanan, with low expectations and a tight fist, dismisses Sunny’s ambitions.
Mavourneen is surprisingly welcomed by the small Jewish community still reeling from the Holocaust. Comfortable with the English mores she grew up with she is Sunny’s greatest asset but marital miscues are heartbreaking as she tries to please.
Sunny wants proper indoor toilets for everyone. He realizes beyond medical improvements Umzimtuti could become an industrial center. The only way to bring it about is to oust Mayor Buchanan. Mavourneen and the Jewish community worry anti-Semitism will affect his campaign as the struggles of the Jews against the British Mandate in Palestine are broadcast nightly on the BBC Overseas Service. But he is confident; “the people will judge me on my own record.” He is winning the people over one spot-on medical diagnosis and treatment or decisive surgical intervention at a time.
But then there is news King George VI, Ruler of the British Empire and Emperor of India, will actually stop off on his Victory Tour. It’s whitewash everywhere. Everyone’s preoccupied with the building of a Royal Retreat on the Umzimtuti River, planning a welcoming Royal Tea at the Railway Park and much else. Fervor for King and Country reaches fever pitch.
Sunny’s days are eighteen hours long. He knows he cannot afford to lose a medical case, whatever the cause. His political campaign is waning, when the phone rings, yet again, in the middle of the night…
Is Sunny about to ruin his track record and his credibility? Will this town sacrifice true progress for a good show?
Africa amplifies everything. Whitewashed Jacarandas is about medicine, miracles, misfits and miscues and the cost of conformity and suppression of emotional life to find fulfillment in the immense task of a half built civilization.
Seven out of thirteen national agents I pitched asked for more at the Willamette Writers Conference. Two have asked for the entire manuscript, one requesting a two week ‘exclusive’. Meanwhile I continue to solicit other agents and fine tune the manuscript based on the feedback from my Inner Circle.
In case you are wondering if this story, set almost seventy years ago, is relevant today even Bill Gates is involved with his Reinvent the Toilet Challenge (RTTC) http://www.gatesfoundation.org/What-We-Do/Global-Development/Water-Sanitation-and-Hygiene
and progress is more elusive than one might expect: http://www.bloomberg.com/news/2014-08-03/india-s-toilet-race-failing-as-villages-don-t-use-them.html
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